new songs
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new songs
been doing a couple of recording thingys the last few days and recorded a couple songs ive composed, their nothing heavy but im rather proud of them so far and how theyve come out. all my own work, my singing, my guitar, my drums my lyrics
http://www.myspace.com/gregoryscott42
can listen and if you have a myspace you can comment on my page, or you can comment right here in DBB
would be nice to know what people think
http://www.myspace.com/gregoryscott42
can listen and if you have a myspace you can comment on my page, or you can comment right here in DBB
would be nice to know what people think
. . . and they shall know no fear . . .
I dont want to offend any one who likes myspace.com (wich is most of the country.... soon the world...) it just highlights what's wrong with the world today... I will start a new post on this later, but for the moment, allow me to go off topic.
Children in this day and age don't have very good social skills, for the fact that they can't run an play in the street and many public schools are taking recess away, isn’t helping. Parents are the ones who arrange play dates, so kids don’t even have to go threw the process of meeting people in the real world and relating to them. Myspace feeds off this because it forces you search for people with similar interests, who live in your area. People with good social skills can make friends with just about anyone and can be interesting no matter how different the other person is. Back in the time of Christ or Rome, you will see how much people loved to just sit and talk. Back then you didn’t only know that being friendly and virtuous was how to behave but you knew how. And you knew how to debate with others and talk at great lengths on subjects about the simplest things. Today kids (statistics show it’s mostly boys. Girls are neurologically hardwired to have good social skills) cant even understand why that telling jokes in a room full of upset people is wrong. I don’t think my social skills are very good but I try hard to be interesting and attentive who ever I meet. I have to more to say on this, but you should now know why I protest against myspace.com
Children in this day and age don't have very good social skills, for the fact that they can't run an play in the street and many public schools are taking recess away, isn’t helping. Parents are the ones who arrange play dates, so kids don’t even have to go threw the process of meeting people in the real world and relating to them. Myspace feeds off this because it forces you search for people with similar interests, who live in your area. People with good social skills can make friends with just about anyone and can be interesting no matter how different the other person is. Back in the time of Christ or Rome, you will see how much people loved to just sit and talk. Back then you didn’t only know that being friendly and virtuous was how to behave but you knew how. And you knew how to debate with others and talk at great lengths on subjects about the simplest things. Today kids (statistics show it’s mostly boys. Girls are neurologically hardwired to have good social skills) cant even understand why that telling jokes in a room full of upset people is wrong. I don’t think my social skills are very good but I try hard to be interesting and attentive who ever I meet. I have to more to say on this, but you should now know why I protest against myspace.com
Well, here's what I see so far (I'll give a deeper listen soon):
- You can't sing well (no worries, I can't sing at all), maybe it's because you're not singing at full volume, and not traveling around far enough. Your voice lacks power and variation -- try singing louder!
- You seem to use a lot of the same chords and very similar progressions; but it worked for Neil Young...
- The timing on the keyboard part on Pay the Man (the most interesting song, I believe) is off. Might be the attack for the patch you're playing. Also, it's too staccato, try extending some of the notes a bit. A little bit of contrast between longer notes and the short \"poppy\" notes would be great.