Into Cerberon short story: Corrupted Backup

[HeXetic]

I'm just a few hours away from finishing up a "6DOF Doom3" proof-of-concept mod (so far, no major problems), but in the meantime I wanted to release this "atmosphere" piece to help set the kind of mood I would like to create in Into Cerberon, the Descent-into-Doom³ mod. It's a short story called "Corrupted Backup":

http://www.chmodoplusr.com/IntoCerberon ... Backup.pdf

I know we all love reading lame fan-fiction, but if you're interested in helping the mod, one easy way to do so is to give the story a read and post your comments on the environment it sets up.

Thanks in advance for any feedback. You can also comment on the work in #IntoCerberon on irc.gamesurge.net

[Duper]

Wonderful piece of "cheeze"!!!!


No really. It's a great read. Give it a look guys. For those who have gone thru the single player and have barely scraped by, you know how much this would just suck!

[Thenior]

Well written


Needs more detail of the enviroment. The battles were described fairly well, but the enviroment details need work.

Good start though!