Cyan Jenner

The artists and authors forum! NOTE: © original author - do not use w/out consent!

Moderators: MetalBeast, Capm

Post Reply
User avatar
Sapphire Wolf
DBB Admiral
DBB Admiral
Posts: 1463
Joined: Mon Nov 24, 2003 3:01 am
Location: Nope.avi , gender: male
Contact:

Cyan Jenner

Post by Sapphire Wolf »

Check out this Mech I drew:
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/10230358/

Please make good comments.
User avatar
Duper
DBB Master
DBB Master
Posts: 9214
Joined: Thu Nov 22, 2001 3:01 am
Location: Beaverton, Oregon USA

Post by Duper »

I agree with the first comment on the Deviant board. Your perspective and parallelisim (is that a word?) needs a lot of work. However. If this is the way you draw, with a good deal of practice and refinement, it could be a very unique and cool stylization.

Keep working with the highlighting and take a look at how other anime is highlighted. I recommend Kyouryuu's work for some very excellent examples.

Much "highlighting" is actually done, not with white brushing, but with a different color that is lighter or heavy contrasting black lines for metal reflection with white between 2 of them. Many pix with banded metal use this gimick.

KEEP DRAWING!
User avatar
Liquid Fire
DBB Ace
DBB Ace
Posts: 403
Joined: Wed Oct 15, 2003 2:01 am
Location: Los Gatos, CA, USA
Contact:

Post by Liquid Fire »

picasso-mech :wink:
Cyclone
DBB Ace
DBB Ace
Posts: 463
Joined: Mon Apr 17, 2000 2:01 am
Location: Saskatchewan,Canada
Contact:

Post by Cyclone »

I agree with Duper on the perspective thing. I like your drawing though. It shows improvement over your last post. I also like the colours and style. :)
User avatar
Nitrofox125
DBB Admiral
DBB Admiral
Posts: 1848
Joined: Sun Jul 07, 2002 2:01 am
Location: Colorado Springs, CO, USA
Contact:

Post by Nitrofox125 »

^^ agrees.

You were going for the right idea on the shining but you might want to clean it up a bit (looks like you went wild with the white airbrush if ya know what I mean ;) ). But looks good.
User avatar
Sirius
DBB Master
DBB Master
Posts: 5616
Joined: Fri May 28, 1999 2:01 am
Location: Bellevue, WA
Contact:

Post by Sirius »

You're getting better at it, that's for sure. Keep it up.
Post Reply