Cyan Jenner

Sapphire Wolf · Post by **Sapphire Wolf** » Mon Aug 30, 2004 10:25 pm

Check out this Mech I drew:
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/10230358/

Please make good comments.

Duper · Post by **Duper** » Mon Aug 30, 2004 10:47 pm

I agree with the first comment on the Deviant board. Your perspective and parallelisim (is that a word?) needs a lot of work. However. If this is the way you draw, with a good deal of practice and refinement, it could be a very unique and cool stylization.

Keep working with the highlighting and take a look at how other anime is highlighted. I recommend Kyouryuu's work for some very excellent examples.

Much "highlighting" is actually done, not with white brushing, but with a different color that is lighter or heavy contrasting black lines for metal reflection with white between 2 of them. Many pix with banded metal use this gimick.

KEEP DRAWING!

Liquid Fire · Post by **Liquid Fire** » Mon Aug 30, 2004 10:52 pm

picasso-mech

Cyclone · Post by **Cyclone** » Mon Aug 30, 2004 11:00 pm

I agree with Duper on the perspective thing. I like your drawing though. It shows improvement over your last post. I also like the colours and style.

Nitrofox125 · Post by **Nitrofox125** » Tue Aug 31, 2004 6:04 am

^^ agrees.

You were going for the right idea on the shining but you might want to clean it up a bit (looks like you went wild with the white airbrush if ya know what I mean

). But looks good.

Sirius · Post by **Sirius** » Tue Aug 31, 2004 7:22 pm

You're getting better at it, that's for sure. Keep it up.