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Untitled Poem

Posted: Sun Sep 19, 2004 7:49 am
by Beowulf
The half moon mirrors those under her eyes
Her eyeliner smeared and makeup caked
Like a porceline mask on a porcelain face
To hide her porcelain mind

And her porcelain heart
Which pumps not blood
But vacuum and ice
She's thrown into the porcelain

To be so fragile, you'd think it'd break up
Like a bad rhyme scheme
But it just sinks to the bottom of her porcelain face
And makes the water rise.

Posted: Sun Sep 19, 2004 11:37 am
by Top Gun
Very nice, except that you misspelled "porcelean." :P

Posted: Sun Sep 19, 2004 6:32 pm
by Beowulf
Heh...well its "porcelain" anyway but yeah I noticed.

Fixed.

Posted: Sun Sep 19, 2004 6:49 pm
by Top Gun
Crap...what is it about that word? :P