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mypeom i just started and finishedd - yes it's poetry assh

Posted: Mon Dec 13, 2004 6:29 am
by roid
I don't mind cockroaches in places where they can be, in places where i need not be. There are 2 forms of comedy these days, there is traditional comedy and dark comedy. darkness is gaining strength in our world, it's being fed by consistency and hte rebeliion against it. invalidation of what others want. if only they could live forever, or long enough to rise above their scars.

when darkness will reign, finally, it will redefine the dark.it'l be alaska.

hhmmm

### th e purpose of it all can be simply to sit back and to watch the pornography of life pass us by - from through those nifty rose coloured glasses, with a mouth sometimes opened in anger, but never opened to commit harm.



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i just watched fear and loathing in lasvegas. so much mumbling, i wish life had subtitles.
what are your thoughts on the movie?
★■◆●... what were MY thoughts on the movie?! oh i gave them in the last paragraph. ###

Posted: Mon Dec 13, 2004 6:53 am
by BUBBALOU
been playing in mothers medicine cabinet again.. roid?

Posted: Mon Dec 13, 2004 7:34 am
by JMEaT
Were you drunk? :lol:

Posted: Mon Dec 13, 2004 8:40 am
by Flabby Chick
I can't make my mind up if Roidy is a genius or....somthing else!!

Posted: Mon Dec 13, 2004 9:17 am
by roid
actually i wasn't drunk, but these moments always feel like it.

i just figured i'd write some stuff down, thoughts of the moment. it's still only a pale middleground between thought processes and proper concrete writings. most things are lost, obliterated by the next following train.

if it's too much, i can stop. but i'll probabaly meet any such requests to with a solid "p!ss off".
just remember that whenever i post i'm translating myself HEAVY so that it's not like this. yes it's mostly inaccessable, but this is how i actually prefer to write.

i figured i'd put a "poetry" marker on it and see what happens :P. but since i think like this ten to the dosen... (?)

sometimes i stir, like from a movie like this, and i go into flux.

i really will end up one of those crazy men scribbling incoherencies on walls. comming to a city park bench near you.

Posted: Mon Dec 13, 2004 9:57 am
by Avder
You knew this was coming roid...

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Posted: Mon Dec 13, 2004 10:02 am
by Phoenix Red
I thought it made sense. Very raw, but definitely workable material.

Posted: Mon Dec 13, 2004 10:56 am
by Pandora
what Phoenix said